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    dots Submission Name: BLOW IT OUT (rap-comedy)dots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 805
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1779



    Description:
       Comedy about letting gases from your back side.


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    dotsBLOW IT OUT (rap-comedy)dots
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    Boom-Boom-Bang-Bang!SPat!
    I here gas?
    from your ass!
    sound if you had something wet to say
    the one who deal
    it must have smelled it
    so take that funk away
    funk right out the door
    I said if you have to let it rip
    don't act like you didn't feel it comen
    next time!
    take your nasty ass to the can
    Ozzy!wooy!what a smell
    I sure it came from hell
    Boom!Boda!Sniff-sniff!
    dam now it smell like rotten corpses
    or dead mans upper lips
    Uoe!Shit!what the hell did this
    made me clinch my teeth
    Ueo!Wee!everybody hold your noses
    we don't want to smell that smell
    no more!get a ride call a cab
    take that nasty smell some were els
    call a doctor!one form the zoo
    I know animals has die and
    crawled up inside of you
    don't want to make you blush
    but the smell just too much
    so take this chance and
    run away
    to the bath room
    and take a bow-movement
    you can do it
    and let your butt get to it
    blow it up!make a splash
    let the toilet easy your ass
    maybe you should were a mask
    we don't want you to gaga
    but!with the you, left behind
    I don't think I mind
    Aaa!smells like a thousands howches
    who forget to wash their cochies
    Your!HOO!HOO!smells like
    WHOO!WHOO! Aeuo!
    Who-da!What-da!How-da!Hell!
    lock someone up in farter's jail
    tell the judge
    it knocked me out
    call the poot-poot cops
    stuff that butt with a big sock
    that funk knocked me out
    (sound of gaging & girl yelling)
    (1st of rap-lyrics)




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 13:57:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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