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    dots Submission Name: ''NEW DOG LIFE''dots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
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       by:ms.v The hope to sale my lyrics and change my fate~


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    dots''NEW DOG LIFE''dots
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    Upon my good fortune
    Upon a great deal
    may I have the will
    to feel the wind
    blow in my new found fortune
    and may I be hairy
    to my good day
    and shed my extra
    old life away
    here to my new dog life
    here to my new dog day
    here to shedding my old
    life away!




    Submitted on 2006-04-23 14:40:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sweet and too the point and how may I help
    you my found friend
    i see your new welcome to site may you enjoy your stay
    | Posted on 2006-04-23 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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