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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       06/03 by:ms.v


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    dots'' ADS ''dots
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    Padestal availavle
    petite pieces of soul
    to loan out
    existing in a classic valid
    hot woman
    seek plenty of enormous comprehension
    for steaming variations of communication
    lonely luxurious deluxe queen
    installed new custom
    complete digital satellite
    for a much need traditional king
    willing to cook classic gourmet memories of angus style
    woman made entrees
    just for an unshaven master of
    my amusement !!!




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