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    dots Submission Name: ''IF I COULD''dots
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    Author: ms.v
    Elite Ratio:    6.72 - 109/24/20
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    Description:
       BY:ms.v


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    dots''IF I COULD''dots
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    IF EVER THERE WAS A TIME
    TO LET YOUR MEMORIES GO
    THIS WAS IT
    AND IF THERE WAS EVER A TIME
    TO STOP THE TEARS
    I'VE CRIED
    THIS WOULD BE IT
    AND IFS ARE SO NOT THE ANSWER TO WHY
    I CAN'T STOP CRYING OVER YOU
    AND IFS ONLY
    YOU WANTED ME -AND IF ONLY YOU COULD MISS ME TOO
    THAN IFS COULD BE EVERYTHING TO ME
    JUST AS THEY COULD BE TO YOU
    IF I COULD CHANGE ALL THE IFS ABOUT ME
    WOULD IT BE
    JUST A DREAM TO BRING YOU BACK TO ME
    AS IF I COULD EVER MAKE YOU LOVE ME
    AS IF YOU WOULD EVEN EVER HAVE LOVED
    ME
    SO I'LL DREAM IN MY MEMORIES OF YOU
    AS IF YOU DID
    BECAUSE THERE IN MY MEMORIES
    AS IF I COULD CHANGE




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