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    dots Submission Name: Life and Deathdots
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    Author: Laz
    ASL Info:    22/m/WV
    Elite Ratio:    2.6 - 18/36/5
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    What is life is it the process of living or is it the fact that without love and friendship life isn't worth living so what is the meaning of life, in terms of agreement the meaning of life is love and happiness. Then what is death some would say it is evil but what would happen if nobody died or nothing die's, if you could never kill an animal or pick fruit or grow crops the world would fall into decay and disorder, people would starve but not die an eternity of starvation and hoplessness that all would sucumb to. No death and life go hand in hand because without one the other would fail and yet people call death evil. The meaning of life has no beginning or end it just exists in the perception of the human mind.




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      Hmmmmmmmm, sounds like you were in deep thought with your phisiligical side. Well, overall it was great so keep up teh great work and don't stop writing!


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    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by jslbabygirl101 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very interesting and thought provoking. I think you could probably break the lines up and put them in a more poetic form. It would make for easier reading and add to the weight of your words. As the Celts said: Death is the center of a long life. Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by Scribner | [ Reply to This ]
      this piece of work you wrote makes you think about things which is good. open your eyes to all the question and wonder what could be if nothing else exsited. good work. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      looks like someone has been doing some deep thinking, which is cool, cause we all feel like this at some point in time...it's cool that you wrote it all down though...here's what i think...
    "we live to die, and die to live..." i always say that...
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      I have to agree, without love and happiness life isn't worth living. As for death, Life and Death do go hand in hand.. This is the curse of Life.. We all owe a death, there are no exceptions.
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by Vampirism | [ Reply to This ]
      death is but a new life reborn again

    but I like it but don't know why

    it's different
    | Posted on 2006-04-23 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty cool and what you said

    makes sense. Very philosophical, very

    poetical.

    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by GreyWater | [ Reply to This ]


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