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    dots Submission Name: Raine Babydots
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    Author: ebflannery
    ASL Info:    24/
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 184/184/48
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 229
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 408



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    dotsRaine Babydots
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    Raine Baby, do not cry
    I am here with you
    The skies may storm,
    Lightening flash,
    But you are safe, with me
    Dry your tears,
    Revel in the splendor
    Of the cleansing of the heavens
    And remember, when it pours
    The angels are giving their gift
    So the flowers can grow
    For you alone
    My Blooming Queen,
    My daughter




    Submitted on 2006-04-24 11:50:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Interesting poem. The title brought me in, and my first thought was this was for someone. Definatly a poem that is short and sweet. I can see that you are like a guardian angel for your daughter, which all mothers should be. Im happy you have lots of love for your daughter. This was definatly a short and sweet poem. It is good like this, but more to be added on would always be welcome. :D Thanks for the post.

    Respect.
    | Posted on 2006-04-24 00:00:00 | by irish storm | [ Reply to This ]



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