Description: Getting lost is my daily routinene. Its just a thought I picked up from just being threw soe ish, but I hope u like. Comment plz and thank-you.
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Lost
I get lost in my words.
I get lost in my thoughts.
I get lost in my emotions.
I get lost in my soul.
I get lost in my confusion.
I get lost in my intelligence.
I get lost in many things but if I were not lost sometimes, I don’t think everything would be normal.
Interesting poem, only it was kinda short. I don't have anything against short poems with alot of meaning, but here you could insist on the idea of being lost in very normal things for you that belong to you for such a long time, getting lost in an everyday routine, simply becoming tired. You could put some metaphores and give some everyday examples just to lighten' it up. It has a very good essence and I really like the idea. I have some days when everything seems strange to me because I simply feel too tired to go on. Don't stop adding to this idea, the message comes across more through the description than through the poem itself. Keep working on it. -Angie-
I agree with Angie44. Maybe add more to this and explain how you get lost or even why. I also suggest that you do add some metaphors and imagery to this to spice it up. You got something good here to work with. Hey, I get lost a time or too myself, you are not alone.
Submission Name: Lost
