Sound like you need an hug if you were by me Id give you an hug spinn your around till your happy, your scares Im sure tell an story why be that way you dont want to be like everybody else depressed, you should be different special your poem is good everybody has there own problems I do Im not perfect I run from the past im sure you dont, Anyways thought id drop an few lines for you hope you feel happy and may you feel the joy and happiness, big smiles ty
Oh wow, I am amazed to find this without comments. Very deep into what it means to be one that cuts themselves. People find it hard to understand why others do this, and you have given the world a perfect definition and reason. Very well written. The redundancy of the two words.. My Scars suits the flow and doesn't make it sound bad at all. I love how you can express this so wonderfully.
I would point out which stanzas and lines I like the most, but I have nearly written a book for you thus far. Teehee. I believe this is my favorite write of yours. Very full of emotion and imagery so delightful. Don't let anyone tell you that you aren't good at this, for it wouldn't be true.
I have to add this one to my faves, keep up the awesome work! I am so thrilled to have read this, and I am just sorry I didn't find it sooner.