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    dots Submission Name: Stupid Girldots

    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsStupid Girldots

    Stupid girl,
    look what you do
    To all you love
    And the pain you put them through.

    Stupid girl
    With your dumb dreams
    Acting like the world
    Isn't as bad as it seems.

    Stupid girl
    Don't you know
    Your alone?
    And you'll always be on your own?

    Stupid girl
    Wanting to die.
    Hating your life
    And not knowing why.

    Stupid girl
    I hate you.
    But of course
    You hate yourself too.

    I'm the stupid girl
    With the stupid life.
    And I will chose to end it now,
    With this knife....

    Submitted on 2006-04-24 21:11:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this one. I can feel the anger in it. ANd how yuo make it seem as at first you talk about someone else and really along it was yourself that you critasizes. Srry can't spell worth [censored] Renae. Well i like this one. I love you!!

    Luv alway'z

    Kelsey ( annoying one )LOL!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]

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