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    dots Submission Name: I AMdots

    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsI AMdots

    I am your daughter,not meeting your expectation
    I am your sister, not making a good impression
    I am your student,failing your every question
    I am your friend, hiding my depression
    I am your target, where you let out ur frustration
    I am your grandchild,part of the next generation
    I am a victim,of self-mutilation
    I am a musician, with poor intonation
    I am a teenager, with no ambition
    I am not happy, with no explanation
    I am locked up, until granduation
    I am me.
    Do you need a translation?

    Submitted on 2006-04-24 21:14:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this poem it is so true.....I can really relate to it....That sometimes we are what we write and others will be the same way....Thank you for writing....

    tip thyhat.....and......
    ....... .....bid the farwell.....i love you...<3!!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem. It says everything so plain and out there with nothing false to hide behind. There are some spelling errors but other than that it is a great poem.
    | Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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