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    dots Submission Name: My Sindots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 834
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 420



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       a poem about cutting...


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    dotsMy Sindots
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    Driving a razor into my skin.
    Love for the blood,this is my sin.

    All the anger inside of me.
    All the pain you cannot see.

    Slice it up,bleed it away.
    So I can live another day.

    Deeper and deeper, why can't I feel?
    I need to know if this is real.

    Dead inside, at life I can't win.
    Surviving by cutting,this is my sin.




    Submitted on 2006-04-24 21:15:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Renae:

    Good write. I really like this one. I can't believe that I have never really looked this one over. I must say for only 14 you sure are good. DOn't ever stop we need your talent in this cruel,harsh, and dreadflu world we all are apart of. I F.L.Y!!

    Luv alway'z

    kelsey ( annoying one )LOL!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      "Love for the blood,this is my sin."

    I love that. (Blood is wonderful, I must admit.)

    I like how all the emotion you put into this shows so clearly in every line.

    "All the pain you cannot see.

    Slice it up,bleed it away.
    So I can live another day."

    I think thats my favorite part, but I like the whole thing

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-07-09 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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