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    dots Submission Name: My Sad Lifedots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsMy Sad Lifedots
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    She doesn't understand
    He doesn't see.
    That their words hurt
    And it's killing me.

    I'm a cutter
    But they don't understand.
    When they see my scars
    They just get mad.

    Don't they understand,
    That I did this for them?
    So they would know,
    I'm forever condemed.

    I hate myself
    But no one cares.
    Not even them.
    They were never there.

    So here I am.
    Blade in hand
    I'm going to show them,
    Why I feel so bad.

    Goodbye mom.
    Goodbye dad.
    I'm dying now
    And I couldn't be more glad.




    Submitted on 2006-04-24 21:16:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I understand exactly what you are talking about...It's likke you go to tell the one person that you killed your self alittle more...And all they do is get mad at you....They don't understand.....I like this one it is a good write....I tip thy hat....and...bid the farwell...i love you...<3!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]


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