Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Self-mutilationdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 916
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 821



    Description:
       another cutter poem...comments please


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSelf-mutilationdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Every cut tells a story,
    A plan of escape.
    A way to express,
    The underlying hate.

    Each and every scar,
    Has a story never told.
    The scars never leave,
    Yet the stories are so old.

    Again and again,
    The blood has let out.
    Flowing from my wrist,
    Letting there be no doubt.

    Just one more cut,
    THe obsession getting stronger.
    Another story to be told,
    Before I can't take it any longer.

    The stories get deeper,
    Both blood and tears flow.
    The rush of fear and excitement,
    Makes it all worth it, you know?

    I know what they say,
    But I don't care about my reputation.
    My life has been taken over,
    By this self-mutilation.




    Submitted on 2006-04-24 21:48:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      You describe that perfectly.

    "The stories get deeper,
    Both blood and tears flow.
    The rush of fear and excitement,
    Makes it all worth it, you know?"

    Yeah, it seems like it does. I've been there. It sucks.
    But I'm not gonna say anything wise. lol I got nothing.

    Anywho, I like this.

    Very nicely done
    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-07-09 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it alot. I can relate to it. I understsand your feeling and emotion in this one. Keep up the writing and stop the wrong. It make take long. BUT hurting evryone is never anygood. We know that you never ould. Smile with glee. We all hear your plea.


    Kelsey
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    100372

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Summer written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Linger written by saartha
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Every..... written by jackz
    written by Daniel Barlow
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    written by Daniel Barlow
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    One Day written by WriteSomething
    written by Daniel Barlow
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Song written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry