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    dots Submission Name: Self-mutilationdots

    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 907
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       another cutter poem...comments please

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Every cut tells a story,
    A plan of escape.
    A way to express,
    The underlying hate.

    Each and every scar,
    Has a story never told.
    The scars never leave,
    Yet the stories are so old.

    Again and again,
    The blood has let out.
    Flowing from my wrist,
    Letting there be no doubt.

    Just one more cut,
    THe obsession getting stronger.
    Another story to be told,
    Before I can't take it any longer.

    The stories get deeper,
    Both blood and tears flow.
    The rush of fear and excitement,
    Makes it all worth it, you know?

    I know what they say,
    But I don't care about my reputation.
    My life has been taken over,
    By this self-mutilation.

    Submitted on 2006-04-24 21:48:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You describe that perfectly.

    "The stories get deeper,
    Both blood and tears flow.
    The rush of fear and excitement,
    Makes it all worth it, you know?"

    Yeah, it seems like it does. I've been there. It sucks.
    But I'm not gonna say anything wise. lol I got nothing.

    Anywho, I like this.

    Very nicely done
    | Posted on 2006-07-09 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it alot. I can relate to it. I understsand your feeling and emotion in this one. Keep up the writing and stop the wrong. It make take long. BUT hurting evryone is never anygood. We know that you never ould. Smile with glee. We all hear your plea.

    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]

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