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Change of Tide

Author: obaid
ASL Info:    21/M/Gauntlet
Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 148 /93 /34
Words: 236
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Change of Tide

When I climb the mountain
I decide that today I'll be dieng.
When at the top, my conscience hits me and
tells me that its a heinous crime I'll be committing.

I know I might not have as much sorrows
As most of you reading what I write.
Being blamed for something I never thought I'd cause
Is when I wish I could give up this fight.

You, my friend, think I don't uderstand
The intesity of the damage I've caused.
You're wrong and you make me feel
Like I'm a friend you've already lost!

It's like I was standing on top of the cliff-
And a dreaded wind pushed me over it.
I've meant all my sorries but if you don't understand-it's time and I'll be gone in a bit.

I remember that you had misunderstood me
For something frank I had said...
You had hurt me then but what i did recently
Was a mistake, and not a plan of vengeance that i had made!

It seemed to me that you had trusted me enough. And had taken me close!
I forgave you everytime you unrealisingly hurt me but...To not forgive is I guess what you already chose!

You are probably thinking that things among us can never be the same again.
It depends on what you choose...
And i chose to not apologise ever agian!

Submitted on 2006-04-25 10:07:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow wahtever it was youdid couldnt have been that bad we are all human and make mistakes and if your friend dont know that than they werent a true friend.
| Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by homie1065 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey, man, what happened was probably not your fault. No need to even THINK about jumping off cliffs and crap like that! Like I always say- DON'T DO ANYTHING STUPID! If I was in his shoes, I would have tried to work it out for the best both ways, not just desert a friend and lose the girl at the same time, lol.
| Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ]

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