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    dots Submission Name: Deep down Insidedots
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    Author: jslbabygirl101
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 76/82/49
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 180
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 863



    Description:
       this is about my feelings a while back of a good friend.


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    dotsDeep down Insidedots
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    Deep down inside I know it's there,
    but if I let it out it will leave me bare.
    But if Id on't it will get the best of me,
    And all that will be left will be nothing for me too see.

    It's not like I don't care,
    It's not like I don't try.
    It's not like I don't see you there,
    it's not like you don't see me cry.

    You think you know the real reason,
    but deep inside not even I...
    know the real reason of this soul treason,
    there is nothing here that tells me why.

    It's just another heartbreak waiting to happen down the road,
    it's just something i've been told.
    that i don't listen to a single word,
    because there is nothing about this that should be heard.




    Submitted on 2006-04-25 16:54:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Inner deep feelings have a habit of releasing themselves in many different ways. You captured your feelings on paper and this was a very deep and meaningful write - well done.
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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