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Ghostly Emotions

Author: juss_kriss
ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404 /445 /126
Words: 222
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
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Ghostly Emotions

Verse 1
you look at me ever so sneaky
with your ghost eyes
your eyes are barely seeing
see me in the corner of your eye
you want to stop
but yet you still go

lost in this mistry fog
haunted by your ghostly emotions
they can't always been seen
but you know they're there

baby you're just trying to hide your love
but i can see it in your eyes
actions speak louder than words
and the screaming in your hearts be heard

Verse 2
you touch me ever so gently
with your ghost hands
your touch i'm hardly feeling
as you run you hand along my back
you tell me stop
but you let me go


Verse 3
you kiss me ever so softly
with your ghost lips
our lips are barely touching
but still i feel the love in your soul
you mind says stop
but you heart shouts go


you mind says stop
but your heart shouts go
lost in this misty fog
haunted by your ghostly emotions
actions speak louder than words
and the screaming in your heart's been heard

Submitted on 2006-04-25 18:22:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really like this one. there are some typos but i'll let that slide. j/k

theseare one of the first lyrics ive read on here that i like. im picky like that. it just shoves the image of someone singing this.

great job
| Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by chilz | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really good
It is certainly good to see you posting again
You do have a talent with song lyrics
I missed not seeing your name
How are you doing?
Well if you get a chance keep in touch
Great Job with this one
God Bless
| Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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