Ghostly Emotions

Author: juss_kriss ASL Info:    23/F/Canada Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404 /445 /126 Words: 222

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Ghostly Emotions

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Verse 1 you look at me ever so sneaky with your ghost eyes your eyes are barely seeing see me in the corner of your eye you want to stop but yet you still go Pre-Chorus lost in this mistry fog haunted by your ghostly emotions they can't always been seen but you know they're there Chorus baby you're just trying to hide your love but i can see it in your eyes actions speak louder than words and the screaming in your hearts be heard Verse 2 you touch me ever so gently with your ghost hands your touch i'm hardly feeling as you run you hand along my back you tell me stop but you let me go Pre-Chorus & Chorus Verse 3 you kiss me ever so softly with your ghost lips our lips are barely touching but still i feel the love in your soul you mind says stop but you heart shouts go Pre-Chorus & Chorus Coda you mind says stop but your heart shouts go lost in this misty fog haunted by your ghostly emotions actions speak louder than words and the screaming in your heart's been heard

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I really like this one. there are some typos but i'll let that slide. j/k theseare one of the first lyrics ive read on here that i like. im picky like that. it just shoves the image of someone singing this. great job chilz

| Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by chilz | [ Reply to This ]

This is really good It is certainly good to see you posting again You do have a talent with song lyrics I missed not seeing your name How are you doing? Well if you get a chance keep in touch Great Job with this one God Bless Ron

| Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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