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    dots Submission Name: nothindots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    the blade of a blood is eternaly cold/
    only as cold as a crypt, flipped, and
    considered bold/
    a hero/
    but I say NO/
    aint shit in my eyes/
    the only real gangstas is the ones that have already died/
    tupac, was the poetic, hope for the rapper/
    biggie, was gangsta, bad boy, and former trapper/
    the others were all just pawns/
    waiting to die, in old folks lawns/
    the fact is I can't let my life be over run/
    by these wanna be thugs, all they want is my funds/
    however, all they gonna get is hollow pointed to the head/
    I'm hollow, my point is clear, I'd rather be dead/
    than allow a bitch to gimme shit I don't deserve/
    the only one of us dead is you, and thats my word/





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      ohh get it..but yea it's true that the only gansta's are dead..me being th exception lol. BUt this was good and like Troy said...Gangsta rap is all that cool to me no more but u kinda right it alittle bit. But i like ur [censored] so that makes me weird and conflicted lol. Anyways this was tight keep writing and then some.


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    | Posted on 2006-05-25 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      this is good. i hate gangsta rap with a [censored] passion. a lot of ur style seems to reflect this kinda rap but it's weird because ur actually against it. that's why i pretty muched stopped listening to commercial rap
    | Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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