When I say bye to you-
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For my parents, cuz i am a boarder, and they go away and live in saudi arabia, where they could die any day... so they left today so i wrote it today. Missing them already.. there isnt a sad so yes depressed
When I say bye to you-
When I say bye to you It’s like saying good-bye To the good times Saying bye to smiling almost Because when I say bye I might not get another chance This might just be the last time I’ll ever see you again And it’s a wonder I cry With that on my mind, Watching you walk away Knowing it might be the last And you never think About these kinds of things when you’re young It’s like a hug and a kiss And you’ll be back someday I praise God every night To keep you safe, For the alternative I fear is unbearable And people say Hush, you’ll see them soon But that’s the thing What if I don’t If I don’t, And I heard the worst, There wouldn’t be a day I didn’t think about you I can’t promise I won’t cry, But I do promise I’ll be strong, Like you told me too |
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| I would just like to start this by saying that I am in awe at your general maturity and poise, I'm nearly twenty and am probibly not as half as mature as you...that being said I would have to say the part that struck a chord in my heart was when you said "I promice to be strong, like you told me to" it made me feel as if this person that you missed is a wise and carring individual, that even though you are sad at the loss of this person that they do not want to burden your everyday life and that you wont let it burn your insides up because you love them and will obey thier request. Other than that I mainly Identify with having to leave someone not knowing if you will ever see them again, you have done an extremely well job of putting those feelings into words you have my respect -TheGentlemanWhore | Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by SlanderousLust | [ Reply to This ] | omg, that is so good. I didn't get what you were talking about at first, i thought you were talking about someone who went to Iraq or something, that would piss me off, because i hate that stupid war. But anyways, that was really good. I thought id read your poem and leave you a comment, seeing as no one else did. ok, well, im done. | ~*~katara~*~ | Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ] | |
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