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    dots Submission Name: Hurtdots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsHurtdots
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    You put me in the corner
    So i dont have to feel
    To get away from the pain
    So that i can finally heal

    You never let me go
    YOu alwaysed killed
    Thepain i onced had
    Felt so real

    You made me bleed
    All over the floor
    Dont even try to
    hurt me anymore




    Submitted on 2006-04-26 08:02:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can understand where you are coming from here, I liked how it was short and cute, keep up the good work and soon you'll get better and better at it. Hope to see more like pure honesty around.





    -We are not that what makes us...but just who we are beneath the masses of our disgiuse...
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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