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    dots Submission Name: Everythingdots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsEverythingdots
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    Every new beginning,
    comes from some some beginnings end.

    Every time you kill me,
    I am born again.

    Every time you close that door,
    Another door is opened.

    And every time you say goodbye,
    a different word is spoken.

    Every time you look at me
    my back is facing you,

    And every time you ask to see me
    I'll have something else to do.

    Every time I join your game,
    You're not playing fair,

    And every time I really love you,
    I pretend that I don't care.




    Submitted on 2006-04-26 08:20:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its, like an anology meets opposing views of agreement, but still has the same meaning. What most tend to do is hide what they are really feeling 'cause they are afraid....afraid of the truth or the outcome of it. So it is that they may act like they don't care but in all reality they do, they refuse to cease to contemplation as their thoughts or true feelings aren't really there.
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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