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    dots Submission Name: Sea of Nectardots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSea of Nectardots
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    Oh, let's just swim,
    let's just drown
    in this sweet sea.
    I don't care
    if the sweetness overflows my mouth
    if it clouds my eyes.
    As I sink, I dream
    of this glorious place,
    and if I die now
    I'll know that once
    I've kissed your lips.





    Submitted on 2004-01-22 14:13:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      THIS was what I was thinking of when I thought I'd seen Naked in the Oceans before. Guess that means the newer one is on this same level! <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I read all your stuff recently and I have to say you're not getting better and better. no, you're writing one amazing poem after the other. yeah, I'm somehow becoming a fan...
    | Posted on 2004-01-22 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      giving all of your self to one idea is very beautiful, great, just great on how you were able to write that feeling down so fully, without giving too much or too little
    | Posted on 2004-01-22 00:00:00 | by Trystam | [ Reply to This ]
      What a beautiful expression. The art of letting go. Lovin' it.
    | Posted on 2004-01-22 00:00:00 | by kblyric | [ Reply to This ]


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