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Author: Flamequill
ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35
Words: 102
Class/Type: Poetry /
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just something I slapped together just now...yeah...just comment on it


Passed



The voices in my head
won't stay silent
always burning and returning
bringing bak the pains of the past

The yelling is madness
cutting into my skin
always searing and tearing
returning the burning hell I had passed

As I scream from my prison
the dying passion grows stronger
always mudering and killing
the soul I needed to last

The dying pains are growing
ripping through the sounds of earth
repeting the same old curse
Your past you'll never outlast

Dying and crying
this time and place
always tring and hiding
onlyto find my life has already passed




Submitted on 2006-04-26 12:28:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Sounds like your trapped, and past memories keep reoccuring for you. I liked the fact that you slapped it together so fast but still managed to keep your thoughts on point. My favorite Stanza was, "As I scream from my prison
the dying passion grows stronger
always mudering and killing
the soul I needed to last", because it's like the more you feel the pain the more it haunts you and the stronger it becomes disallowing your to recover. So slowly your soul deteriorates from the killing of you passion.


Nice jobe here buddy of Arson.
| Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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