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    dots Submission Name: tonkasdots
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    Author: chilz
    ASL Info:    20/F/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 137/147/84
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 132
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 357



    Description:
       these are two tonkas they follow the format of
    5
    7
    5
    7
    7
    it is like a hiaku but obviouslyhas one extra line.


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    dotstonkasdots
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    one spirited life
    its long limited journey
    will finally end
    with the changing of its hue
    it will grow old, it will die


    ___________________

    two hands intertwine
    a new beggining is formed
    winclose within warmth
    death runs far into its grave
    as life begins to create




    Submitted on 2006-04-26 13:40:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really good
    I liked the idea and I loved the style of Haiku you wrote this one in
    Very well done
    In this write I love how you showed life does not end with death that it is just a new begining
    I really enjoyed reading this one
    I think I might try a tonka my self
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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