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Never Say Never


Author: Linkins_knot
ASL Info:    14/Male/Behind a Computer
Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 20 /46 /19
Words: 265
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I wrote a poem about my girlfriend, but she broke up with me before i could show her... but i just posted this cause i liked it as a regular poem


Never Say Never



"The Girl is My World
She's the Center of My Attention
Oops, Her Name I Have to Mention..."

There was something missing in my heart
Until I found her, my heart began to heal
The taintness depart
It started to peal
What was pealing off used to be a shell
A shell cover with the burning things in hell
A new shell, a shield is born
To keep this new protection healthy is sworn
But something else grew, the girls spirit
I begin to hear it
A whisper to a scream
All this in my nightmares and dreams
I must protect her
Unless both souls will be left with error
There are many things i don't know
But like light through the darkness
It starts to become known
Helps me get closer to happiness
There is something in my head
It won’t let me go to bed
I try to sleep
In my head and mouth, try not to say a peep
I know what it is
Something filled with bliss
I am in love
Spirits filled with the glee of the angels above
Every time a kiss or a touch
My soul wants her very much

If enraged
Both of us try to cleanse it and put it in a cage
If tears are the case
Use my shoulder, your pillow to cry in
The worry will erase
From not and to then
Nikki Farrera
One that started a new era
One inside my heart
Our souls together forever
None will depart
But never say never...







Submitted on 2006-04-26 15:24:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  hey u!! how r u?? YAY!! ur writing again!!! ok i like this!! it was kinda sad!! im sry about ur gf!! well ull find somebdoy soon!! yep!!ok sry im watching oprah!! anyway!! good job!! its a fav!!~akaila~
| Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  this was cool. its not really my style but it ewas good. my lip hurts so im distracted and find myself unable to give it worthy praise but i liked it.. well done.
thanks for stalking me.feels good for someone to think youre ok.
| Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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