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    dots Submission Name: Your dying princessdots
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    Author: jslbabygirl101
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 76/82/49
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 129
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    dotsYour dying princessdots
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    I am standing around listening to these happily-ever-after fairytales,
    knowing mine won't be.
    late at night listening to the nightinggales,
    knowing there is nothing to see.

    When deep inside yuo know it hurts,
    you know I cry.
    when i listen to your words,
    of solid fantasys and lullaby.

    I am no longer you strong princess,
    no longer your pretty peach.
    I am a withered rose longing for the sweetness of water,
    longing for its presence.

    I can't imagine the deep blue seas without the shore,
    the birds and thier nest without a branch.
    the mornings without the singing of the bluejays,
    and a love without it being true.




    Submitted on 2006-04-26 17:26:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You know somthing
    This is really a good write
    I may be wrong here but I take this write as being written by a young women to her Father telling him she is growing up but she is missing his Fatherly touch
    This is really sad
    You wrote this quite well
    Excellent Job
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-05-02 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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