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    dots Submission Name: forgotten memoriesdots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1187
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 610



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    dotsforgotten memoriesdots
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    The best memory is the one you forget the most.
    The worst memory is the one you never forget.
    Our memories make us who we are.
    But some people want to forget them all.
    They want to forget them and more on.
    But no one can get rid of them.
    Not one single person in the world will escape their memories.
    Itís the memory of a child that tells us how to look after them.
    Memories of bad things tells us how to react.
    Your memories are yours and yours alone.
    Every memory will come back.
    The question is, are you ready?




    Submitted on 2006-04-27 07:46:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yeah, I'm ready! haha, only kidding, good poem.
    | Posted on 2007-03-22 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey that was pretty cool. It sux that the memmories u want to remember u forget and the ones u wanna forget is all u remember.

    true write mannn.

    peace.
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      i thought that your poem was very true, i have written something like it before. i loved every line so i don't need to point anything out to you. i believe that if it's written from the heart nothing else matters.
    | Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by fallenfromgrace | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the topic, and the way you expressed yourself, however, if you are trying for a poem it needs and easier flow--some of the lines sound a little forced to me

    other than that its good work...keep it up!!
    xoxo
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this but since im such a blonde it kinda confuzzled me *lol* but seriously i love it! good job!
    -sam
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      forgotten memories
    -------------------------------------------

    "The best memory is the one you forget the most.
    The worst memory is the one you never forget.
    Our memories make us who we are.
    But some people want to forget them all.
    They want to forget them and more on.
    But no one can get rid of them.
    Not one single person in the world will escape their memories.
    Itís the memory of a child that tells us how to look after them.
    Memories of bad things tells us how to react.
    Your memories are yours and yours alone.
    Every memory will come back.
    The question is, are you ready? "


    Well thought out topic.
    Makes you think about what memories are and what they do to us.
    Some lines seem to contradict each other. But then again, so do people's reactions toward things. A tad too straightforward in style.
    But still very readable. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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