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    dots Submission Name: friendshipdots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsfriendshipdots
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    The greatest gift anyone can have is a friendship
    But you have to work towards it and make the commitment
    Thatís why friendship is hard to gain
    No one knows what will happen to it
    Not even the best of friends stay together
    They have to take their separate paths
    Friends do find each other, but donít like what they have found
    People become the complete opposite of what they are
    You have to enjoy your time with your friends
    Because tomorrow may be the day you have to take your path
    You will not notice it at first, but it will happen
    But if you have the tightest bond you could ever have
    Then your friendship may stay together
    Its always been better that way
    So it always will be, treasure your friendship




    Submitted on 2006-04-27 07:47:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Like that other guy said, this ones pretty much true though
    | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought that your thought in the writing was good, but I think that it could have maybe flown a bit better. Friendship is hard to gain for some people, but other people have so many friends that it is crazy. Really good thoughts in your poem. I agree with most of them too. Great job and continue writing great poems.
    | Posted on 2006-07-05 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]


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