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    dots Submission Name: destinydots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1001
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1220



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    dotsdestinydots
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    Every body belives in destiny,
    But when does it begin.
    Is it when you are born?
    Or when you take your first steps?
    Does it begin on the first day of school?
    Or when we leave for good?
    Maybe it starts at certain age,
    Or when we have died.
    Is it possible that our
    Destiny is to live.
    Perhaps our destiny,
    Could be to keep the planet alive?
    It could be to find out more about,
    The past to make a better future.
    Could we live on other planets?
    Maybe just maybe we are here to exist.
    To be here and have no purpose to life,
    No meaning at all.
    Destiny can just be a dream,
    A fantasy of hope and power.
    But can we wake up?
    Maybe we are in an endless sleep,
    And our destiny is to wake up and
    Make more use of the things we have.
    Our destiny could be to find parallel
    Worlds and help others to,
    Realise our wish and questions.
    What is the true meaning of destiny?
    No one knows what their destiny is
    Or when they have achieved it and
    If in doubt follow your heart.





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      I remember when you shown me this one at school!!!
    | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good draconus! I see a lot of thought in this and deep thought at that. I do not do much free verse myself but it is an area that I hope to delve into very soon. Very difficult word to define, destiny......but you put much thought and effort into defining it and questioning it's definition for others. There is a challenge here as well I like to see. Well done and keep up the good work!....Phoenix Sun
    | Posted on 2006-09-13 00:00:00 | by phoenix sun | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the depth you give to your work, and the thought you put into it. The questions you bring up are really wonderful and you seem to be full of ideas and a really articulate way of expressing yourself. Once again, though, it could use a tid bit of flow.
    Overall, I really like your work, and the topics you choose. Quite lovely. Be sure to keep 'em coming, I really would like to read more as you develop.

    XoXo
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      I was fiirst drawn to read this because i also have a poem by the same title.

    In reading this though, i believe you have one bad ass write here that asks alot of questions no one can honestly answer.

    Most of us just follow a self serving path in the name of destiny, where others like myself put no real faith in the word.

    life is what we make it, not what soeone once said we should make it, or what we were pre programmed to do with it.

    It is nice to see someone else's take on the word.

    Outtie~
    Rob
    | Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by ThisIsReal | [ Reply to This ]


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