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    dots Submission Name: hopes and dreams of a young boydots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1149
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 709



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    dotshopes and dreams of a young boydots
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    I DREAM OF BEING A HERO
    I HOPE TO BE A DIGGER
    I DREAM OF BEING A WIZARD
    I HOPE I BECOME A SAILOR
    I DREAM OF BEING A POET
    I HOPE I BECOME AN ARTIST
    I DREAM OF BECOMING A SINGER
    I HOPE OF BECOMING A SHOPKEEPER
    I DREAM OF BECOMING A KING
    I HOPE OF BEING A TEACHER
    I DREAM OF BEING A PIRATE
    I HOPE OF BECOMING A DRAGON
    I DREAM OF BEING ONE OF THE BEST
    I HOPE OF BEING SOMEONE TO LOVE
    I DREAM OF BEING AN ACTOR
    I HOPE OF BECOMING A CHAMPION
    I DREAM OF BEING A KID OF GOOD
    I HOPE OF BECOMING SOMEONE NEW
    I DREAM OF BEING A NEW LIFE
    I HOPE OF BEING A STAR




    Submitted on 2006-04-27 07:51:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha, wouldn't it be good if everybodies dream became a reality? I know what I'd have if they did.
    | Posted on 2007-03-23 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      hopes and dreams. releases the kid in all of us.U go and u be and if u try hard enough u might get what you dream for.(=

    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      i thought it was a good concept, but i think i would have liked it more if there was more description. Like
    I hope of being a star, the brightest one to shine above the rest.
    or something like that.
    Though i do think the simplicity gives it sometihng unique. Its up to you. Good job and keep writing.
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! your a big dreamer, I really enjoyed this piece even though it was in all caps, nice job here, keep up the good work alright.
    | Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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