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    dots Submission Name: Minority White Girldots
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    Author: kaoriliveshere
    ASL Info:    19/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 5/10/10
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Okay I imagine myself as a becoming a miniority in a my own country.. like if all of the sudden there was only maybe 100 white people left in America


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    dotsMinority White Girldots
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    White girl stuck in a black's man world.
    Have to buy two dollar shoe polish
    To get a fifty cent loaf of bread.

    Throw on some sunglasses to cover my eyes
    That are not black and white but blue as the sky.
    Hope they don't require a dress code where ever I go.

    I could go out as myself someday when I am tan.
    I can tell everyone I am mexican without the accent.
    Hopely, get a discount on my new truck.

    Minority in my own country where I was born.
    I can go outside and play without my shoe polish,
    But I would just turn black the hard way.





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      how do you think how the Indains felt I think
    they are the true americans

    I know and understand what your trying to say
    | Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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