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    dots Submission Name: Dedicated to Youdots
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    Author: kaoriliveshere
    ASL Info:    19/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 5/10/10
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 886
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    Description:
       This is dedicated to my first boyfriend that I loved with all my heart. I still miss him alot.


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    1000 sheet of toliet paper I dedicate to every tear
    I let go everytime I thought about you the past five years.
    The thought of one little thing I could of change to make better
    Takes away all the energy I earn from the dreams of you.

    43 scars all over my body I dedicate to the pain
    I have felt when I thought about how I hurt you.
    The thoughts of if I only tried a little harder to save you
    Takes all the happiness I earn from the pictures I saved.

    Webster full of words I dedicate to my silence
    After all these years of secretly watching you behind my computer.
    The search of that one word could explain what you mean to me
    Takes all the extra daylight I have until I follow a sleep.

    My exiquite heart I dedicate you
    Because it is only happy with your name.
    I wish I could do something I don't know what it is right now
    To give you all the things I have dedicated to you.





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