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    dots Submission Name: I Am No Mandots
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    Author: Flamequill
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77/97/35
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 1611
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       yeah this is a poem I wrote that shows how I was taught and raised in a Latin Family...yeah it sux the poem and the teaching...just bash the hell out of it


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    dotsI Am No Mandots
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    I am no man
    just one's slave

    I am no child
    just one's tears

    I am no boy
    just one's fears

    I am no soul
    just one's knave

    I am nothing
    too low to be anything

    I am matter
    but less than air

    I am no person
    just their shadow

    I am no man
    just men's slave




    Submitted on 2006-04-27 12:59:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this was deep, Ithink you feel worthless, but there definelty is a reason for that, maybe someone took your self worth away....shouldn't have happened. I felt like that at one point of time, but truuuuuust me, it goes away as soon as you discover who you are or have that idea.

    Nice write it was sweet and simple.
    | Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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