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I Am No Man


Author: Flamequill
ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan
Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35
Words: 64
Class/Type: Poetry /Society
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yeah this is a poem I wrote that shows how I was taught and raised in a Latin Family...yeah it sux the poem and the teaching...just bash the hell out of it


I Am No Man



I am no man
just one's slave

I am no child
just one's tears

I am no boy
just one's fears

I am no soul
just one's knave

I am nothing
too low to be anything

I am matter
but less than air

I am no person
just their shadow

I am no man
just men's slave




Submitted on 2006-04-27 12:59:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow, this was deep, Ithink you feel worthless, but there definelty is a reason for that, maybe someone took your self worth away....shouldn't have happened. I felt like that at one point of time, but truuuuuust me, it goes away as soon as you discover who you are or have that idea.

Nice write it was sweet and simple.
| Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]


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