I Am No Man

Author: Flamequill ASL Info:    17/Male/Sparta Michigan Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 77 /97 /35 Words: 64

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I Am No Man

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I am no man just one's slave I am no child just one's tears I am no boy just one's fears I am no soul just one's knave I am nothing too low to be anything I am matter but less than air I am no person just their shadow I am no man just men's slave

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wow, this was deep, Ithink you feel worthless, but there definelty is a reason for that, maybe someone took your self worth away....shouldn't have happened. I felt like that at one point of time, but truuuuuust me, it goes away as soon as you discover who you are or have that idea. Nice write it was sweet and simple.

| Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by SavedDragon | [ Reply to This ]

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