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Good Morning I hope you’re ready for some mourning Your gonna be crying for a while Giving everyone a big smile Grab your skin with torque Use my hands as a fork Peel it all off While you sit there like a lazy sloth Give you all the terror and pain All the pain I was left to gain You can run, but you can’t hide All you’re doing is destroying all your pride Once I find you There will be a lot of people that will miss you I watch you at night But you don’t look out, because you don’t want fright I watch you slit yours wrists Your thoughts thinking about trying not to miss Accidentally kill yourself, wondering why While your waiting to die I’ll be watching blissfully While you’re filled with negativity The Grim Reaper is coming soon to strike With his giant knife, his Scythe Slash through your head Making your body forever asleep in a bed Until your body rots and decays Your dreams and nightmare about my devious ways I’m deciding whose next To see who will have there last breath, last flex… |
i really liked your raw emotion and the anger i want to hate too but i dont have the guts to do so| Posted on 2006-05-09 00:00:00 | by manymoodsofme | [ Reply to This ] | hey back again!!! i like it!! kinda took me back 2 jr high and all da bull[censored] that happened but thats ok!! there were some parts were the flow kinda left but thats ok!! i still liked it!! good job!~akaila~ | | Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ] | seems a little rough but nothing thats not easily fixable. iliked it... i thought a few places such as "Accidentally kill yourself, wondering why | While your waiting to die" sounded like they could rhyme better. | Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ] | nice and simple, but i liked it. Reminds me of stuff i did in my sophmore year though. | | Posted on 2006-04-27 00:00:00 | by Silenced poet | [ Reply to This ] | |