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Investor Of the Rejected


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 346
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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For all those kids who every came last place in a race,
Who are just plain rebels,
who ever never got picked for the team,
who always got laughed at,
who never fitted in,
for all those who had friends that never listend,
for all those people who hate people who think they know it all and their sh*t dusnt stink

this

is

for u


Investor Of the Rejected



Investor of the rejected
With a naïve heart
And taste for the insane
Delivering you truth,
So here it comes
Pray it doesn’t hurt-

For all those who
Never seemed
To fit in
Here’s a tribute
To the hard times
We’ve shared…

Go on know it alls,
Search the books
That sit on your shelf,
I’m the famous of the invisible
Look carefully,
I’m between every page.

Believe me
It’s not easy
For kids like us.
Hold your breath fly away,
Break away from conformity
Society is no place for a rebel

Investor of the rejected
With a naïve heart
And taste for the insane
Delivering you truth,
I’m just warming up
I hope its killing inside

Surrounded by the fake
The ones that call themselves
Friends,
Dishonest answers
Tell them to get stuffed
We don’t wanna be the same

When we ran fast
And came last
For all those who laughed
We’ll make a mockery
Cuz now you sing these words
And you don’t know what they mean

You never can hide
Who you are inside
So embrace it with open arms
And with your uniqueness
Learn how to fly away
From the weights of opinions

Investor of the rejected
With a naïve heart
And taste for the insane
Last hits the worst
Cover your ears
If you don’t wanna cry

I guess it’s hard for you
Knowing you never could
Be something else
Other than average
To do something
Everyone else wasn’t

To hard to hack
That the strange
Have feelings to
And maybe if you kick
A dog to hard
It might just bite you

It’s a lot of words
Maybe to many for some
I guess its hard to comprehend
Or come to understand
But what can you expect
From a brain so small

Investor of the rejected
With a naïve heart
And taste for the insane
Delivering you truth,
So that was it-
I hope it hurt like hell




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  The description makes me think of Good Charlotte.

I like this. Normally, long poems and stuff don't hold my attention, but this did.
I think the only thing I didn't like was the line, "We don’t wanna be the same."
Too overdone. It makes you the same as everyone else who doesn't want to be the same.

Anywho, aside from the one line, this is very original, and I enjoyed it


Very nicely done
-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-10-10 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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