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    dots Submission Name: robindots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 841
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    dotsrobindots
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    YOU FLY IN THE AIR
    WITH GRACE AND FLAIR
    YOU SING OUT YOUR HEART
    EVEN IF ITS BROKEN APART

    I LOOK AT YOU EVERYDAY
    READY TO FLY IN ANY WAY
    I KNOW THE WINTER WINDS ARE STRONG
    BUT IT CANT DEFEAT YOUR MORNING SONG


    YOUR MIGHT IS STROGER THAN ANY HEART
    JUST LIKE A FAMILY THAT IS TORN APART
    YOUR MORNING GLORY IS BEST AT NIGHT
    AS IN THE DAY YOU MUST FIGHT

    YOU FIGHT FOR YOUR FAMILY IS SO WRONG
    YOUR BOUND TO WIN WITH YOU SO STRONG
    YOU ARE STONG WITH YOUR HEARTS CONSENT
    BECAUSE YOU HAVE TO REPOSENT

    YOU ARE A MIHGTY ROBIN
    NOTHING CAN BEAT YOU
    YOU ARE SO GREAT AND POWERFUL
    YOU ARE A DREAM COME TRUE




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 06:59:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed this one. So many poems that people write talk about either someone has left them, or they talk about how much there life sucks, or stuff like that. But this is a great poem that just lives. It's not about anything stupid, or annoying, or how life sucks....it just is. Good job.


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    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by blue_pixie_dust | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it I enjoyed the fact that it is about Robin. I love Robin. I didn't think anyone else viewed him in that way. YOU ROCK!
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my goodness, that as magnifecent. I liked how it was about a robin. I have never thought of a robin in that way as powerful, mighty and brilliant. The only thing I was wondering is why you typed it in all capitals. I guess it doesn't really matter, I was just a little curious. Good job with this poem. I really liked it. Keep on Writing. :D
    | Posted on 2006-07-05 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]


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