I really enjoyed this one. So many poems that people write talk about either someone has left them, or they talk about how much there life sucks, or stuff like that. But this is a great poem that just lives. It's not about anything stupid, or annoying, or how life sucks....it just is. Good job.
Oh my goodness, that as magnifecent. I liked how it was about a robin. I have never thought of a robin in that way as powerful, mighty and brilliant. The only thing I was wondering is why you typed it in all capitals. I guess it doesn't really matter, I was just a little curious. Good job with this poem. I really liked it. Keep on Writing. :D