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    dots Submission Name: rosemarrydots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 831
    Average Vote:    4.3333
    Bytes: 182



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    dotsrosemarrydots
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    Redder than the sun,
    Out on the horizon
    Seeing everything
    Moments of you
    Red blood of death
    Redder than anything
    You are young wild and free




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 07:00:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      is the title about a girl's name or the herb rosemary? either way, it works...

    no, it's about a girl, isn't it? this red signifies passion and love to me, the setting sun on the horizon that you want to touch...

    nice.

    zd

    oh yeah, i'm pretty sure you spell it rosemary, not rosemarry, but hey ;)
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]
      wow draonus, youve outdone yourself with this one, is your snowbell poem up yet?
    see u at scool 2morro. good luck with the rest of ur SATs oh and go on the forum soon, its borin without u. oh and I LOVE THE POEM!!!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2006-05-02 00:00:00 | by ellesmera | [ Reply to This ]
      Very powerful, but, again, the caps lock takes away from it. I liked the shortness of it, it made a strong point get across to the reader like the flip of a switch blade.

    *Toxic*
    | Posted on 2006-04-28 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]


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