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    dots Submission Name: the new worlddots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsthe new worlddots
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    The new world is said to be the better place .
    In fact thatís not true. The new world is a place where the world will be taken over by the new technology. But thatís the opinion of a few people. What happens to the New World is up to you and is in your control.




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 07:00:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice. the new world is what u want it to be because its ur actions that are gonna make it new. its is under ur control


    laterrrr
    Aylin
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice. the new world is what u want it to be because its ur actions that are gonna make it new. its is under ur control


    laterrrr
    Aylin
    | Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      I used to wonder I thought it would be cool for there to be robots everywhere. Then I saw that movie starring Will Smith and now I'm kind of hoping that doesn't hapen.
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah, so true man...

    is this the new world order you speak of? where there'll be robots doing all the work for us, relegating humans to an almost inferior role? it makes me wonder...

    zd
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]


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