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    dots Submission Name: the true meaning of christmas lovedots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsthe true meaning of christmas lovedots
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    The true meaning of Christmas is not about toys
    Itís about love and joy
    The true meaning of Christmas is not about treats
    Itís about meet and greets
    The true meaning of Christmas is not about holidays
    Itís about a holy day

    For Christmas day is the greatest day
    That the earth had achieved anyway
    A baby boy was placed on earth
    And now we pray for that sacred birth
    He let his son teach us the way of peace
    And we remember him with a Christmas feast




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 07:01:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      keep a churning them poems....
    get the message out there :_)
    | Posted on 2006-09-23 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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