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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    As the bells ring high
    And the carollers sing
    People stand to gather
    Around there Christmas trees,
    Opening presents from ants and uncles.

    But what is Christmas
    What is the reason for it.
    We save money and spend it in seconds.
    Why do we give the gifts to share?

    Christmas is about when god gave his son
    His one and only child
    To the world of terror
    And gave him to us to share.
    And give us great guidance

    He gave us Christ to right our wrongs
    To keep us true and wise




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 07:02:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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