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    dots Submission Name: a poem from grandots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       i wrote this when my great gran died and read it at her funeral


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    dotsa poem from grandots
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    i am sorry to be leaving my family
    and my friends
    but i have had a good life
    right up until the end
    forgive me that you are there
    and i am gone
    i loved u all, especially some
    but edwin son i want to
    thankyou
    for everything you have done
    so even so i have gone
    don't cry my next life has
    just begun
    but try to remember the good
    times we shared
    because good memories are always
    there
    remember me pushing you on
    the swings in the park
    and how i made you less
    scared of the dark
    remember how we spent time
    together
    in your hearts i will love you forever
    so dry your eyes, and read
    my letter
    because i have just kissed
    you all and made you better




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 07:03:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oooh. okay. I like this. You take O levels in the Uk right? Well if you do, i kinda think this poem would be great for a Literature O level exam paper. Its a compliment! hahas! It'd be fun although slighly difficult(because i find the poem comprehensive) to you know, deduce the innuedo of the poem (: I would deduce but i havent got the time!
    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]
      a poem from gran
    -------------------------------------------

    "i am sorry to be leaving my family
    and my friends
    but i have had a good life
    right up until the end
    forgive me that you are there
    and i am gone
    i loved u all, especially some
    but edwin son i want to
    thankyou
    for everything you have done
    so even so i have gone
    don't cry my next life has
    just begun
    but try to remember the good
    times we shared
    because good memories are always
    there
    remember me pushing you on
    the swings in the park
    and how i made you less
    scared of the dark
    remember how we spent time
    together
    in your hearts i will love you forever
    so dry your eyes, and read
    my letter
    because i have just kissed
    you all and made you better "

    A worthy tribute and a sensitive unveiling of a beautiful heart.

    I am sure you great gran would have loved this.


    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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