TRUE LOVE a tanka

Author: mimi ASL Info:    30/f/ny Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111 Words: 46

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TRUE LOVE a tanka

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To see my lover I've gone a thousand miles and came back alone. To find my true love i've turned toward my neighbor to travel no more. To meet my lover I've searched a thousand memories and my time was up.

Submitted on 2006-04-28 15:44:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I liked the first one. The second was nice. I did not connect with the last one. I commend you for writing in this style. I know it is hard to do. You conveyed your feelings well and your wroding was nice. Overall, this was good. Catrina

| Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]

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