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    dots Submission Name: Surrealdots
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    Author: jslbabygirl101
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 76/82/49
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 138
    Average Vote:    2.5000
    Bytes: 620



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    dotsSurrealdots
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    Haunted by your presence,
    that forever hauts me.
    I stare into your eyes,
    to see more than the eyes can see.

    I've fallen from your gaze,
    with a never ending stare.
    just like you would hope,
    you've fallen from your nightmare.

    Though you can't see it,
    I know you want to.
    but you don't see it happening,
    and I know it's true.

    You say you don't belive in love at first sight,
    then why do you fall for it?
    if it's not real.
    if this is really how you feel




    Submitted on 2006-04-28 20:41:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This had a good start but seem to taper off as you drew near the end. I do believe this has major potential to be improved. Good start, need a better ans stronger ending.

    Catrina
    | Posted on 2006-05-06 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]



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