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Author: Perpetualdreamz
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To see the flicker of light brings out the warmth in me, wonders from all the thoughts in me, "Why it can't be pale pink?" quite astonishes the mind in me, for it seems to coontain so many emotions, "Why not colours too?"
Perhaps it does.
Strands or blotches of everycoloure, those we can not see, "What of those who are blind?"
We believe all they see is darkness,
Darkness is of blackness.
Nonetheless, the colours are there.
We just need the flicker of light, however small or large for everything to appear

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