There are two strong lines in this piece; one found in the first section and the other in the last. The poem reads like this "...sorry it took so long to be sorry...see youve got me yelling again..." Those lines STUCK in a good way, the rest well...(smile)reads just like the persona was speaking to me and in defense I tuned it out (same ole, same ole excuses). The feelings expressed came across as identifiable and real. Also the repetion in "sorry it took so long to be sorry" sounds perfect. The other uses of repetion like "now" in lines 7 and 8 come across as an uncontrollable rant. Hope this feedback is received in the manner in which it was intended.