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    dots Submission Name: L.O.V.Edots

    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/The pain inside
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       ok typical poem about thinking that you actually found your one and only true love and then you don't have it anymore, and always trying to find some way to forget about the moments and move on. comments please and thank-you.

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    the source of pain and happiness;
    the thing that breaks hearts;
    endless swirls of pain;
    blinded by the tears,
    and fixed by those hugs and kisses

    the one thing that makes you feel beautiful,
    when everyone thinks your ugly,
    in a place where looks are everything

    the cause of blindness,
    the one thing I've never known

    the stupid empty place in my heart,
    that's never had true...


    Submitted on 2006-04-29 19:37:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      just thought id return the favor. This poem is so true. That really reminds me of what a "friend" of mine said to me this morning, how he could see me from a mile away, that's how important i am to him. But, this is so true. Everyone needs love and to be loved. That's just how humans are. And to not be loved, it makes you feel so empty inside. Well, that's all i have today, bye.

    | Posted on 2006-05-02 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this piece..It was interesting..I have felt love, and its worth everything.But sadly its just another excuse to get hurt, and then the hurt turns to hate. I thought that second stanza was good, except for the middle line, It just seemed out of place to me for some reason. Because when you say,

    "when everyone thinks your ugly"

    It sorta means your making Love a person, and Love can never be a person, Love is a feeling, brought by people.But sadly people only have the nature to love and forget and then hurt and die, so depressing of me,lol. Anywho i really did love this piece. Hope to read more of your work!!

    | Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ]

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