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    dots Submission Name: Accorddots
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    Author: metalman_21
    ASL Info:    17/m/NE
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 30/42/17
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 783
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 620



    Description:
       Another post from me tonight. This is a song I started writing after one of my best friends got gunned down in a drive by in Omaha, NE. It killed me to watch him die in my arms, and I swore to get revenge on the people who did it. I haven't found them yet, but, as the song says, they will pay. Please comment and help me out if you think it needs improvement. Thanks guys!


    -Chris C.


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    Verse 1:
    Why are we here?
    To live? To die?
    Intent on living the most successful lie.
    Every few seconds, a blood-brother dies,
    darkening hearts and unwinding the ties.

    What do we know?
    In death and life?
    Another few seconds and another knife.
    Cutting and bleeding our hearts from our chest.
    Is the the only way for us to rest?

    Chorus:
    In my heart, you'll burn forever.
    A candle lighting the way.
    *******SCREAMING********
    A notch in the belt for one,
    screams revenge.
    They will pay.




    Submitted on 2006-04-29 22:06:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was serious...impressive delivery and impact it had. Its hard to imagine how it would feel to have one of my boyz killed but this write seems to tell it reall well.

    PC
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]


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