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A few months back A little down the track Things happened I’d rather forget But the past scratched And scars are set I thought I knew you You thought you knew me We did everything together Cuz it was forever… forever... Now I look at you And I don’t know who you are Cuz you were my best friend And I wanna know Where’d you go? But the good times came And the good times went And the tears we cried Went well spent… Don’t look at me With that blank face I know you’re not listening You’re in some other place Well this is good-bye… good-bye Now I can’t look at you, Cuz I don’t know who you are Cuz what you said, You never meant Fake tears well spent… What’s a best friend to you? Someone who sits and doesn’t care, Just looks never listens, I’ve seen better friendships come out of bears And I hope when you’re sitting all alone You slit your wrist right to the bone And sadness turns into fear When you realize no one will hear Or care that you are screaming Is that what you call mates? When forever in your eyes Means never Paining me within You show neglect. You left me like a broken doll And as the waves of tears roll You sit behind that screen I hope you bleed out this scene So this is respect? Sitting on the edge of my bed Your chilling insults Echoing in my head All the fakeness All the lies Best friends in your mind Means its gonna die This is the end… the end Now I’m not gonna look at you Cuz I don’t know who you are Cuz you were never my best friend And this is the end… the end. |
"And I hope when you’re sitting all alone You slit your wrist right to the bone And sadness turns into fear When you realize no one will hear Or care that you are screaming" OMG, I [censored]in' love that part, that was [censored]in' sick! Overall it could benefit from a different format, and punctuation. I'ts also lacking color and outwardly descriptiveness. You explain well you but give no other view, and kinda just leave it hanging, so to speak. Also, synonyms, deffinately emotional though, I'll give you that! | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ] | |