love.... i personally think is a terrible subject. but we all write about it including me. its sad and im sorry, and i some what agree with poetry chica. i ususually dont like rhyme and stuff like this, but it all adds up and its ok. keep writing. -BleedingTears
very sad. we all long to have what is just out of our reach. things seem so close but when you reach for them you find that they are a mile away. none of us feel worthy at time but it's almost always something that we can change if we try or if we truly desire to...overall i thought this was a very good write. keep up the good work
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